Writing Sample 31

Some say that it is good for children to stay away from their families and go to a boarding school. Others say that children had better live with their families and attend a day school. What do you think about it? 

Nowadays more and more parents send their children to boarding schools, taking it for granted that boarding schools should provide much better accommodations, facilities and more qualified teaching staff at the condition that they charge much more than other schools. In addition, parents are able to get rid of the burden of raising children.

I am against children being brought up without their parents around.

Nevertheless, except quite a few, many children out of boarding schools do not turn out to be a gentleman or a lady. On the contrary, most of them learn to be selfish, inconsiderate,unsociable or other poor behaviours. What's worse, they become isolated from their parents, relatives or playmates lack of enough contact with them.

There're a great deal of evidences that crinimals are not well bred especially in an envionment without their parents' attention and affection.

How is the statue of parents replaced by the world outside like boarding schools? And who can play the role of kinblood part of a person especially when he is young?

Every happy family consists of the union of each family member including the children. Parents cannot avoid the responsibility of bringing up their children in person no matter how busy they are. A child would grow up healthily under his parents' love and care to be a good citizen of the great family----the society. (227words)